Evaluation: Audience

Audience feedback come from both our form group and also a year twelve media class. In the first set of feedback we found that we got back alot of negative comments and the audience found the piece to be a stereotype of black father. the second group didn't pick up on this and neither have other people done so when I posted it on Facebook, eventhough its still a comment to keep in mind during distribution. Below are comments that got back after posting the video on my Facebook, I also have to keep in mind that I know the individuals so a positive is that they will tell me truth on their thoughts and encourouge growth in the work.

James Gitari

impressive. really nice opinions. the actor did a really good job.:)))))))

Elijah Authentic Baker 22 April

Nicely done:)

Yvonne Kabuye 22 April

Well done girlfriend u pulled through nice piece of work.Realli like the content in it what your tryin to get there to people.congrats.

Fai Fai Bowwow

i like this its captivating, i love how you kept it natrual with the background noise it does alot for the video, actors are blesd, although i must say if i was in the video now this would be sumfin elseeee lol xx nice work hun

The graphs show the feedback that we got from the questionnaire that we complied it shows that the audience questioned found the merge of drama and documetary worked well and found that the film didn’t underepresent any ground in society. The greatest and most consistant of comment is the strength of the scripting.